English problem??? please help!!!

Posted on 2014-11-27 08:07:00 in English by SOFIJA

Could fluent speakers of English tell me if I wrote this paragraph correctly? (this is about adoption of new currency called euro)

The attitude toward the Euro has remained virtually unchanged. This change observed since the previous survey is not to be regarded as significant. The proportions of people who are “for” and “against” the Euro adoption have remained virtually the same (the percentage of people who are “strongly for” the Euro adoption grew from 40% to 42%, whereas those who are “strongly against” the adoption increased from 10%to 9%).

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